http://kero99.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kero99.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lah_mrh 2013-06-17 10:16 pm (UTC)

beautiful. i like how sulu and chekov handled spock's questions. i like the simplicity of your phrasing. i could read fics about the aftermath of spock's re-fusion forever, so i'm happy to have another perspective on the resolution of kirk's wait-and-hope strategy. very effective use of 'and remembers' at the end of the piece, too. thanks for sharing.

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