http://lah-mrh.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lah-mrh.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lah_mrh 2013-05-26 10:02 pm (UTC)

Thank you!

I love the parallels you drew between the deaths of her husband and son

To be fair, that part was in the prompt. :) But I'm glad you liked it.

and how the idea that they died to save many others rings hollow when it is someone you love who was lost.

Thanks. I actually based it a little on how Kirk reacts at the beginning of The Search for Spock. Knowing that someone you love died a hero doesn't change the fact that they died, and I wanted to show that.

And Spock's relatively emotional attitude is great.

I'm glad you think so. I was worried that it might come off a bit too un-Vulcan, but I thought it fit with how he reacted in the film.

Anyway, thank you for the review, and I'm glad you liked the fic.

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